The night of war
In 1969 in New York, people could hear an ominous sound everyday. It sounded like building a big thing. It was really an annoying sound. It made people crazy. After 1 month...
Many miraculous creatures come out from the Atlantic ocean. Now people knew this sound was the building of a bridge between space and Earth. After 1 week, aliens came out from the Atlantic ocean. Fortunately, there was one old hero that might defeat this miraculous creature. The problem is that this hero is too old to fight against this alien. He should be trained again for at least 3 years. Then how could we defeat them? People should defeat it with an army. Many people sacrificed during these three years. Finally, he finished training and went outside to fight against this alien.
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An interesting story on the war between mankind and aliens. You could have developed the story further and elaborated more on the details, such as people's reaction on the 'annoying sound', alien's characteristics, and hero's characteristics. I actually don't understand the third ending though. What happened after the hero made the supa-dupa team?
ReplyDeleteThis is a creative story. It is too short though and as Sun Woo said you should try adding more details.
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