Wednesday, August 7, 2013

persuasive writing

8.5 monday
Dear. participants of this blog

 I am writing this letter because I believe South Korea and North Korea must be integrated.
Many presidents like Park Gun Hae, for example agree  with me. I will explain reasons for this and give facts to support my opinion.
The first reason is because there will be no war or tension between North and South Korea.
The fact shows this is true. According to fact #1, Korea will be peaceful and have no internal disputes.

 The second reason is because Korea integrating by a war harms us a lot. 
The fact shows this is true. According to fact #2, kim jung un likes war a lot but we might be able to persuade him easily.

 The final reason is because integration helps each other a lot. My last fact has been discovered as North having resources and South having techniques so it really help each other. As you can see, North and South should be integrated peacefully.

Based on my arguments, I hope you will consider my point of view.

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3 comments:

  1. Yul ChoiAugust 7, 2013 at 1:10 AM

    I really like your pictures. I think that North
    Korea and South Korea should be integrated too.

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  2. UnknownAugust 9, 2013 at 3:45 AM

    Wrote it already??

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  3. UnknownAugust 13, 2013 at 4:23 AM

    This is a good opinion but you present facts without giving evidence or sources for the information so it is not very convincing. Adding evidence to support your reasons would make a stronger persuasive argument.

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